Hi Dele! Great video, I like how you explore the diversity of activity that goes into writing, from questioning via the cartoon character with the question, tot he exercising to show how it takes writing and rewriting and revising to get our ideas where we want them, which perhaps had something to do with the man dancing behind the poem, though I didn't fully grasp that one, but overall, I enjoyed the images, the song, and the commentary.
I love you video! The free spirited song and the use of words such as exercise in literacy while you have people doing push ups, I found it funny and clever. Watching your video reminded that people write because it makes one happy. Your video gave me a very free, relaxing and reassuring vibe! Thank you!
Hi Dele! Great video, I like how you explore the diversity of activity that goes into writing, from questioning via the cartoon character with the question, tot he exercising to show how it takes writing and rewriting and revising to get our ideas where we want them, which perhaps had something to do with the man dancing behind the poem, though I didn't fully grasp that one, but overall, I enjoyed the images, the song, and the commentary.
ReplyDeleteI love you video! The free spirited song and the use of words such as exercise in literacy while you have people doing push ups, I found it funny and clever. Watching your video reminded that people write because it makes one happy. Your video gave me a very free, relaxing and reassuring vibe! Thank you!
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